my camp story!

my camp story we used show and tell to show how we can easily make writing more  exciting and using different words  here is mine.

Tell: the walk to living springs was very tiring
Show:he he! I could almost drift into a deep slumber.I cold barley

walk another step I was being encouraged as I reached the final step my legs ached as if I'd walk mt.Everest

Later collected my luggage and found my cabin I almost fall asleep on the soft white cloud of the bed 

I was in heaven or paradise the room itself was a small cramped with a view of Greenery  and

Rooms of screaming girls !!
well thats what camps about!