Thursday, 17 April 2014

my camp story!

my camp story we used show and tell to show how we can easily make writing more  exciting and using different words  here is mine.

Tell: the walk to living springs was very tiring
Show:he he! I could almost drift into a deep slumber.I cold barley
walk another step I was being encouraged as I reached the final step my legs ached as if I'd walk mt.Everest

Later collected my luggage and found my cabin I almost fall asleep on the soft white cloud of the bed 
I was in heaven or paradise the room itself was a small cramped with a view of Greenery  and
Rooms of screaming girls !!
well thats what camps about!

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