Thursday, 7 April 2016

My Argument

For writing we have been learning to write an argument using the writing process. The topic was “Are Devices Taking Over Our Lives”.

Something I did really well in my writing was making my readers think asking rhetorical questions and choosing thing that they could relate too

Here is a section of my writing that shows this.'s incredible but what are the downsides? 20 years from now what will we be? Living robots? Devices can change your eyesight,back,hearing, lifestyle and much more.
Two year olds today have the latest iphone or tablet and our missing out on a true childhood.
So  do you think is it really taking over our lives? Or is it making a better future?

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